The Bread Monster (By: Lucas Mendonça)
In the morning, I always have tea mud for breakfast. After breakfast I always scare people and bathe in the sewage.
In the afternoons, I usually steal people's lunch. I love to lunch ox tripe and then I clean the house before I take a little nap.
In the evenings, I often wake up and I look for more food, then I bathe in the mud again and I prepare to scare more people. After dinner, I dry myself and go to bed.
I. Read the paragraphs below, and then write down your suggestiions to improve the composition.
a. THE CLOWN MONSTER (GABRIEL NERIS)
I am the clown monster. I am fat and ugly. I have spiky, short, dark hair, 3 eyes, 2 arms, 2 legs and a cap . I live in the darkness. I like to eat eyes.
In the mornings, I Always have tripes for breakfast. I don't usually do many things because I work all night scaring people. I just sleep and take it easy listening to rock music and watching Scooby Doo.
In the afternoons,I usually have some ears for snack and just fart. After, I leave for work at 3:00 a.m.
In the evenings, I often have a lot of things to do, but I sometimes feel lonely, because people are afraid of me, they only like me on Halloween.
In summary, my life is very stressing, but I love it. My routine isn't very boring. I need to be very creative, because I never scare the same way every day I need a different trick.
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b. A monster’s diary (Renan Gomes)
My name is Paul. I am lonely and sad. I don’t have hair and legs. I have one eye, two small arms, one wheel and one tail witch one hand. I live in nightmares. I like to scare little children.
My name is Paul. I am lonely and sad. I don’t have hair and legs. I have one eye, two small arms, one wheel and one tail witch one hand. I live in nightmares. I like to scare little children.
In the morning, I always have goo for breakfast. I don’t usually do many things because I work all night scaring little children. I just sleep and take it easy listening music of screams and watching bloody deaths.
In the evenings, I often have a lot of things to do, but I sometimes feel lonely, because peoples are afraid of me. They only like me on Halloween.
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c. A monster’s Diary (Gabi Gomes)
I am the evil monster. I am tall and strong. I have long, black and thorn hair, one eye, small arms, one leg and I have sharp teeth. I live in haunted house. I like to scary.
In the mornings, I always have eyes with blood for breakfast. I don’t usually do many things because I work all night scaring people. I just sleep and take it easy. Listening to rock music and watching horror movie.
In the afternoons, I usually have some insects for snack. After, I leave for work at 03:00 a.m.
In the evenings, I often have a lot of things to do, but I sometimes feel lonely, because people are afraid of me. They only like me on Halloween.
In summary, my life is very cruel, but I love it. My routine isn’t very boring. I need to be very creative, because I never scare the same way. Every day I need a different trick.
d. Luana Souza
My name is luana. I'm evil and funny. I live under beds. I have big eyes and antenna,my fur is yellow. I can fly. I like to sleep and I don't like to eat vegetables..
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e. Mateus Alves - B3
I am the Monster Smoker. I am evil and hooded. I have tongue, sharp teeth, long nails, 2 eyes 2 arms, legs tall I am psychopath. I live in hell. I like to watch the 'premonition'. I like the style of Metal music.
In the mornings, I always have meat for breakfast. I do not usually because of the many things I work all night scaring and terrorizing people.
In the afternoons, I usualy have some eyes was just blood and lungs. After, I leave for work at 3:30 a.m.
In the evernings, aften I have a lot of things to the, but I somentenes ful lonely because people are afraid of me.
I summary, my life is very cruel but love it. My routine is not very boring I need to be very creative, because I never scare The Same Way. Everyday I need a differente trick.
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I am the bath room monster. I am short and fat, I have short, black, spikey hair, 3 eyes, no arms, no legs and 19 teeth, I live in kitchen. I like to bath room.
ResponderExcluirIn the mornings, I always have eyes for breakfast, I don't usually do many things because I work all nigth scaring people. I just sleep and take it easy listening to funck music and watching blond bath room.
In the afternoons, I usually have some eyes for snack and just kill roaches. After, I leave for work at 02:30 a.m.
In the evenings, I often have a lote of things to do, but I sometimes ful lonely, because people are afraid of me. They only like me on Halloween.
In summary, my life is very solitary, but I love it. My routine isn't very boring. I need to be very creative, because I never scare the same way. Everday I need a different trinck.
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ResponderExcluirI can see your monster's breakfast is delicious, but remember no to separate the word bathromm. Very nice.
ExcluirI'm a Darkness Monster. I'm Very Tall and Thin. I have spike, short and Black hair, Black eyes, 2 long arms and short legs. I live in the darkness. I Like to do Disgusting things 3:)...
ResponderExcluirIn the morning, i always have raw meat for breakfast. I Don't ussualy do many things because i work all night scaring people. I just sleep and take it listening to the darkness song and watching people's Dying HA HA !!
In teh afternoons. I ussualy have some Fingers stew for snack and just hunt. After, I leave for work at 2:25 A.M
In the Evenings , I often have a lot of things to do, but i sometimes feel lonely because people are afraid of me. They only like me on Hallowen..
In Summary, My life is very alone, But i love it. My routine isn't very boring. I need to be very creative becase i never scare the same way. Everyday i need a diferent trick
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ExcluirI'm the evil alien monster. I am powerful and intelligent. I don't have hair, I have four black eyes, i have six tentacles, six feet and three fingers. I have two arms. I live in a spaceship. I like to do evil.
ResponderExcluirIn the morning, I always have coffee with cabbage for breakfast. I don't usually do many things because I work all night scaring people and making mischief. I just sleep and take it easy listening to pop and electronic music, watching romantic films and serials of Disney and playing video games.
In the afternoon, I usually for snack prepare brain cake. After, I leave for work at 12:00a.m.
In the evenings , I often have a lot of things to do, but I sometimes feel lonely, because people are afraid of me. They only like me on Halloween. So I created clones of me to keep me company in the evenings.
In summary, my life is very alone, but is also very lively and I love it. My routine is not very boring. I need to be very creative, because I never scare the some way. Everyday I need a different trick.
I am the yocanaan monsteer. I am cute and striped. I have tail, horn, hair, 4 eyes 2 arms, tall legs and I am haire. I live in cave. I like to watch the 'Bob Esponja'. I like the style of music Rock.
ResponderExcluirIn the mornings, I always have worms for breakfast. I don't usually do many things because I work all night scaring people.
In the afternoons, I usualy have some eyes foi snack and just weth blood . After, I leave for work at 00:30 a.m.
In the evernings, I aften have a lot of things to do, but I somentenes ful lonely because people are afraid of me.
I summary, my life is very cruel but love it. My routine isn't very boring I need to be very creative, because I never scare the same way. Everyday I need a differente trink.
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ExcluirI am the talkative monster. I am tall and I have charp teeth, medusa's hair, one a big eye green, two arms, two legs and don't have a nose. I like to sing.
ResponderExcluirIn the mornings I always have eyes blood for breakfast. I don't usually do many things because I work all night scaring people. O just sleep and take easy listening shouting of human music and watching The Walking Dead.
In the afternoon, I usually have some nails for snack and just. After, I leave for work 4:30 a.m
In the evening, I often have a lot of things to do, but sometimes feel lonely, because are afraid of me. They only like me on halloween.
In summary, my life is very lonely, but I love it. My routine isn't boring. I never scare the same way. Everyday I need a different trick. Letícia Caetano B3
Mateus Alves B3
ResponderExcluirI am the Monster Smoker. I am evil and hooded. I have tongue, sharp teeth, long nails, 2 eyes 2 arms, legs tall I am psychopath. I live in hell. I like to watch the 'premonition'. I like the style of Metal music.
In the mornings, I always have meat for breakfast. I do not usually because of the many things I work all night scaring and terrorizing people.
In the afternoons, I usualy have some eyes was just blood and lungs. After, I leave for work at 3:30 a.m.
In the evernings, aften I have a lot of things to the, but I somentenes ful lonely because people are afraid of me.
I summary, my life is very cruel but love it. My routine is not very boring I need to be very creative, because I never scare The Same Way. Everyday I need a differente trink
Hi there!My name is "Mage"(every body call me that) monster.I am small and powerfull .I have no hair ,red eyes,2 arms,2 legs .I live inside the mountain .I like playgrounds ,because its more easier catch kids when they are concentrated and unconcerned.
ResponderExcluirIn the mornings ,I usually sleep.
In the afternoon, usually have some childreen to eat.After i leave for work at 4:00 a.m
In the evenings ,I often have a lot of things to do,but I sometimes When I feel lonely, I create magical items and Drop em in the city.People are afraid of me .They only like me in the hallowen.
In summary my life is very busy ,but I love it.My routine ins't very boring.I need to be creative because its geting hard Capture kids. every day I need a new trick
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ResponderExcluiri am the park monster . I'm red , long and thin . I'm bald , i have 1 yellow eye , 1 short arm , tail and 2 black sharps teeth . I live in a lake of a town where i go for kill peoples.
In the morning , i always have human ears and fingers for breakfast . I don't usually do many thing because i have a heavy sleep . Next I Listen to Rock music and watching The Walking Dead for pass the time.
In the afternoons , I usually eat some roots and blood for snack . Later I rob the eldery and after i go to be my girlfriend , her name is Amanda . She is beautiful , funny , cute and like of even if i.
In the evenings , i often have some things to make . I like to scaring peoples and next take out some organs of my house . With their skins i make blankets of me and Amanda.Some days i leave of the house to my friends.
In summary i have a good life and i love it. My routine is very relaxed . I like to be a monster becaise i have a beautiful girlfriend and have a good monster friends . Everyday is a new day ...